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The grey rose - Sad Sonamy story
    Chapter 2 : The disappearance
   "8 August of 2013, 08:10 am, Sonic's house"


   Sonic walk's down stair's thinking to himself- "Amy is pregnant and I even know about it! She never told me about it. Maybe she's trying to surprise me! Well if she's trying to surprise me...I will surprise her! Hehehehe"
   -Well there you are! Your coffee is almost cold. What took you so long?-ask's Amy while she eats a toast.  
   Sonic blush- I...I was...in the toilet.  
   -Oh. O.K. Sit down I made you a chilidog!

   -O.K. Thank's! -Sonic sit's down and start's heating is chilidog. -Say Amy...have you ever think on the name you are gonna give to him?
   -What are you talking about? -ask's Amy while she eat's another toast.
   -I'm talking about the baby Amy. The baby that you have in your belly. -Sonic starts
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Literature
The grey rose - Sad Sonamy story
    This fan fiction story was inspired on a real sad story of my friend Tom.   
        
     Chapter 1 : The beginning                        
     Hi my name is Sonic. I am 26 years old and I'm married to this wonderful women call Amy Rose, or used to. It's been 3 month's since that horrible day. Everything was so nice...
    " 8 August of 2013, 08:00 am Sonic's house" 
    "Beep. Beep. Beep"-alarm.
    -YYYYYAAAAAWWWWW!-yawns Sonic-What a wonderful night of sleep. 
    Amy wakes up-Good morning dear.
    -Good morning sweetheart.-says Sonic as he kiss Amy-I'm going to take a shower. OK.
    -OK. I will go make breakfast-Amy stand's up and walks down stairs.
    Sonic think's to himself-<
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Well. What can I say? This was a masterpiece. A well written, well thought masterpiece.
I have read all the other chapters over and over again. And over and over again was I amused.
This journey had both heartwarming romance and soul crushing drama.
A good paced narrative that kept me wanting more.
I cannot praise this enough. I is simply very, very well made.
And to think that this is a fan-fiction! A fan-fiction that clearly surpasses actual published books!
Without a shadow of a doubt.This is THE best fan-fic I have ever had the luck to encounter.
And just one more thing.
Good job.




I will be patiently waiting your future works. Whatever they may be about.(maybe a story of sonic and amy? who knows.)

But one thing is for certain.
I shall be there, and I shall enjoy it.


Sincerely
Joel

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Joel Neves
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Hi. Mi name is Joel Neves. I like to rite allot of thing's, to sad story's, or love story's, or even horror story's, so if you like any of them you can read them here. Have a nice reading! ;)

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SeerLight Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much for the watch! ^^
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Ironex-The-ultimate Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! 
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ThePenVsTheSword Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Student Writer
Thank you for faving "End of the Universe: Chapter 23"!
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ThePenVsTheSword Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2017  Student Writer
Thank you for faving "End of the Universe: Chapter 22"!
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Ironex-The-ultimate Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Don't think I need to tell you why I love your work again. Do I? Wink/Razz 
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ThePenVsTheSword Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2017  Student Writer
Nope, we already saw your comment on it. :)
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ThePenVsTheSword Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2017  Student Writer
Thank you for faving "End of the Universe: Chapter 21"!
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Ironex-The-ultimate Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I'm expecting a wonderful finale to this fantastic adventure. Don't let me down.( I know you won't XD) 
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ThePenVsTheSword Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Student Writer
Well, we have something very specific in mind that we've been planning since the start. ;)
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ThePenVsTheSword Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2017  Student Writer
Thank you for faving "End of the Universe: Chapter 20"!
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